When I first wrote this, I was kind of going off the cuff as I thought things up. I knew that it was going to apocalyptic, and I knew that it would take place in a grocery superstore, and that was really all I went with when the words started coming. The truth is I never really got around to making another draft to tightening things up. Eventually, I might work with it again.

That's good advice! I'm still getting used to the layout and commands for Steemit and its coding, but I'll keep that in mind for sure.