Nice writing, @syzegy. Very nice!
I wish there would be more, though. So many questions!
What happened to society? What is the Black Frost? Why are gadgets and stuff not 'worth a damn' anymore?
Still, it's really great.
Almost skipped this when I didn't see a picture thumbnail, but it was worth it. Pretty sure most persons will, though. Perhaps you could solve that, if it's not too late?
Cheers! :)
When I first wrote this, I was kind of going off the cuff as I thought things up. I knew that it was going to apocalyptic, and I knew that it would take place in a grocery superstore, and that was really all I went with when the words started coming. The truth is I never really got around to making another draft to tightening things up. Eventually, I might work with it again.
That's good advice! I'm still getting used to the layout and commands for Steemit and its coding, but I'll keep that in mind for sure.