Hey @sparten, thank you for the contribution. I appreciate the information provided about the Activity diary. The project is cool, and It is nice that you took the time to write about it. However, the post had issues.
There are repetitions of information. Also, the post had many grammar issues that hurt its readability, including omissions and typos. I am afraid; the post is a letdown. I advise you to work on your writing. Give more time to proofread your text before posting and try always to write clearly and simply. Avoid unnecessary words. Quality is still better than quantity. If you wish, I would be happy to cite a few examples of the issues.
Thank you, hoping to see better contributions from you.
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Thank you for your review, @tykee! Keep up the good work!