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RE: SMOKE NETWORK IS SET TO RELEASE OFFICIAL MAIN-NET BLOCKCHAIN BASED SOCIAL NETWORK.

in #utopian-io7 years ago

Hi, thanks for the early information. There are several questions and points I have for you, however.

To be considered for a potential reward, the blog post must contain unique and insightful editorial content presented in a professional format, ideally with high-quality visual supplements.

We expect that the blog posts are not only valuable with their content but that they also look as good as possible. I can see that you struggle a bit with structuring the text in a comprehensive article and that you were not able to fully utilize the power of markdown to successfully format the text.

You can learn more how to do it in this post. That goes also for the images. It is usually preferred that images are bigger in width than height so that they fit the content and the reader does not need to scroll too much.

If you are not able to take screenshots on the desktop, try to format them so that they do not take so much space.

It would be highly appreciated if you could edit the post and improve so we can proceed with the review.

I would like to see sources of the information you provided. You talk about that it is today that the main-net is ready to be launched, yet I was not able to find this information. I was able to see that the ICO ends today. They announced it on their Twitter and on their ICO website.

I am curious what position you have in the project or how did you get that information. I assume that lots of information are shared on their Telegram group, which I did not join. It is always better to include the resources if this is not the official announcement.

Anyway, the project looks interesting and it is the first project I could see that used original Steem blockchain concept and created a new blockchain and coins.


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Thank you very much for the review, I will kindly edit it perfectly now.

@espoem,I have edited and improved some contents of the post, kindly help me review again, Thanks alot.

I can see that you made changes to images and you added information about your relation to the project and when you discovered it.

  • The idea of collages is good but sometimes less is more. I think that you might have picked some of the images. For example, the last one is repeated three times for no obvious reason.
  • In my opinion, using caps is not ideal. You should avoid using it in the title and in each of the section. Instead, you could use regular headings to structure the post.
  • The first paragraph is quite clumsy. You added few new lines but it does not look good. You should always watch the result, whether the paragraphs are correctly separated.
  • I believe that you could include the link to the GitHub repository within the text. Adding the section from a template with one line of link disrupt the flow and structure of the text. You should keep the links as friendly for the reader as possible. Look at the link to the Whitepaper. It is a redirect from Google, which is unnecessary.

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@espoem, I really appreciate your review and comments, I will note everything in my next contribution. Thanks once again.

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