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     7 years ago 

    I can see that you made changes to images and you added information about your relation to the project and when you discovered it.

    • The idea of collages is good but sometimes less is more. I think that you might have picked some of the images. For example, the last one is repeated three times for no obvious reason.
    • In my opinion, using caps is not ideal. You should avoid using it in the title and in each of the section. Instead, you could use regular headings to structure the post.
    • The first paragraph is quite clumsy. You added few new lines but it does not look good. You should always watch the result, whether the paragraphs are correctly separated.
    • I believe that you could include the link to the GitHub repository within the text. Adding the section from a template with one line of link disrupt the flow and structure of the text. You should keep the links as friendly for the reader as possible. Look at the link to the Whitepaper. It is a redirect from Google, which is unnecessary.

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       7 years ago 

      @espoem, I really appreciate your review and comments, I will note everything in my next contribution. Thanks once again.

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