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RE: The Symbiotic Protocol - Chapter 15 (1 of 2) (My Original Novel)

in #story8 years ago

My brother, @jedau! Man, my day is now complete!

I'm so elated at your comments and haven't felt this way in a long time. The start of a new chapter I find is where I struggle the most. My intention of getting into Drucker's mind to then flow into the storyline narrative was picked up by you perfectly! What a joy you are to hear from, man. I can't tell you!

The stand off between Rik and Drucker was something I really put a lot of thought into. Instead of a good old fashioned slugfest between the two, I had to give it to Drucker. Experience over naviety. The facade of superiority coming from Rik had to be exposed and this chapter got to prove that Drucker does know exactly what he is doing, despite the ongoing battle with his inner demons.

Just as the cards started to crumble for Rik, this new guy arrives on the scene. I mustn't give away too much about Pactor but he will be pivotal to an upcoming part of the book. I can't wait to start writing him in from now on!

Man, I can't believe where I'm at in Steemit and the awesomeness of the people I know there. This place would never be the same without your inspiring and detailed comments. It's just astounding and I am literally indebted to you, brother.

Maximum respect and gratitude for your time and effort with my feedback. Speechless every time....

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