RE: ADSactly Contest - SteemShort #3 - Post 1: Request for First Part of the Story
Let's try again. This is ma proposed summary:
Ernest and Daisy left their cabin in South Surrey, BC at 4PM, with their
self-driving long-haul truck, and drove South crossing the border in 25 minutes.
At 7PM they were at AmerStuff warehouse in Seattle, where a sealed 53 foot
standard container from Costco was loaded on the trailer. The container was
to be delivered to the AmerStuff warehouse in San Fernando, near Los Angeles.
At 7:30PM they already were on the I-5 going south, the truck on auto-pilot.
While driving in Washington State or in California, at least one driver needed
to be in the cabin, but in Oregon, they both could sleep while still driving.
During the three hours that it took the truck to reach Portland, Oregon,
they worked on the Truckoin blockchain, that they both created in 2018,
on top of EOS. After four years, Truckoin had become the main payment platform
for independent truckers as themselves.
After refueling in natural gas in Portland, they were back on the I-5
and they both went to bed.
Shortly before entering California, Ernest was awaken automatically. He sat
into the cabin. Checking his messages, he discover a very worrying communication
from his friend and colleague Tony.
Thank you for your valid summary.
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I REMEMBER IT LIKE IT WAS YESTERDAY, MOST OF US WERE HAPPY OF WHAT WE HAVE ACHIEVED FROM THE PAST YEAR BUT SOME SEEMED NOT SO SETISFIED WITH WHAT THEY GOT , STRESSING WONT CHANGE A THING NOW. IF ONLY THEY HAVE BETTER PREPARED THEMSELVES THAT LAST YEAR THEY COULD HAVE BEEN HAPPY NOW.
IT WASN’T GOING TO BE EASY. YOU ARE YOUR MAN NOW THAT’S WHAT WE WERE TOLD, “NO ONE IS GOING TO CHASE AFTER YOU WHEN YOU DON’T SUBMIT YOUR WORK NOW” ACT YOUR AGE THEY SAID BUT WHO’S TO SAY HOW A PARTICULIAR AGE GROUP HAS TO ACT LIKE I MEAN FROM MY PESPECTIVE ONLY THE BODY GROWS THEN THE MIND REMAINS THE SAME BUT TRIES TO DEFEND ITSELF BY SETTING BOUNDARIES AND WALLS AND WE CALL IT MATURITY.
IT WAS ME AGAISNT THE WORLD THE FIRST FEW DAYS FELT LIKE HEAVEN ON EARTH NO MORE WAKING UP EARLY IN THE MORNING TO GO TO SCHOOL AND FACE CHALLENGES THAT EVERY TEEN FACES, THE SCHOOL GROUNDS ARE A WAR ZONE, CLIQUES ITS EITHER YOU WERE A PART OF SOME FANCY SMANCY OR YOU WERE THE ODD ONE OUT BUT THERE WAS NO MORE OF THAT NOW MY THOUGHTS WERE AS SETTLED AND CALM AS A SUMMERS DAY.
I WAS ATTENDING SCHOOL AT U J “UNIVERSITY OF JOINT” AS THEY CALLED IT WAS GREAT UNTIL A FEW WEEKS PASSED, THAT’S WHEN I STARTED TO REALISE SCHOOL GAVE ME A PURPOSE NOW I ONLY LIVE TO DO THE SAME ROUTINE OVER AND OVER AGAIN ThINGS WERE STARTING TO GET NULLY AT HOME I HAD TO GET A JOB OR LOOK FOR A DECENT COLLEGE TO STUDY AT, DEPRESSION AND DESPERATION WAS SLOWLY SUCKING ME INTO RASH DICISION.
Your summary is too long (289 words).
Please, shorten it to less than 200 words, write it mostly in lower case, and resubmit it as a comment to the post, not as a comment to another comment.
Okay thanks