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RE: Twinkle Twinkle Little Star - 100 Days of Poetry Challenge Day #68

this is really beautiful @theverve, you really have captured that feeling of not belonging, at being at a loss. Even in the places that we are familiar with. I love

Home is where
The heart is
What’s a heart, little star?
The little piece of flesh
That can’t quite
Mind its own business?

the vulnerability you show in your words is so touching. Home is really inside of us, it is being happy with who we are, because once we feel like that we are at home everywhere. This is what I got from your poem. A calling to your inner self to love your self. This is such a treasure. Your flow of words, the rhyming of them all, all fit so well, in my opinion. Really well written and full of heart. I am glad your heart does not mind it's business if this is what comes from it.

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Thank you for your honest opinion. I appreciate it. I've always thought home is not a specific place. Home is created wherever one wants it.

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