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RE: ALCOHOLISM: DEFINITION|CHARACTERISTICS|CAUSE|EFFECTS|TREATMENT
@davidormormhila, you have a decent post but you have not structured your write up well. You could have spaced different paragraphs, added some sub-headings and used some more pictures. It makes your post more attractive and easy to read.
You should also provide references for your article. It gives your post credibility.
I agree with @temitayo-pelumi. To be considered for steemstem upvotes please refer to the guidelines. In its current state, your post does not meet the guidelines. Here are a few suggestions to improve your post: include sources (pictures and info), work on your style (use markdown editor, or just look for style guides on steemit), work on your text quality (style, language). If you have trouble finding scientific sources I have a post that deals with finding scientific sources for free - Link.
Good luck and cheers!
Thanks for the review. IL be sure to make corrections and upgrades in my next post. Cheers!
@davidormormhila, I hope you know you can edit your article up until the seventh day (before payout).
Thanks @temitayo-pelumi. Your review is highly welcome and noted. However, I hope you learnt something from this short read?