Poet Wisdom #1 Ripple

in #poetwisdom8 years ago

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One small ripple
In a pond
Can spread
And linger long
A touch
Or tender word
May reach
A darkening night.
Dispell an anguish looming
Or shed a ray of light
An act
Of sudden kindness
A look of warmth,
A smile
Can melt a soul
in mourning
Relieve one burden
for a while.
How much will it cost
To care for just a bit
And cast away a demon
By vanquishing it's nest?
A ripple on the waters
A human basket test
Take this dare to share your gift.

Janelle Gregory

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Oh, my heart! You are on fire, Janelle. Your words picked me up and took me away with you. Upped and Steemed

Thank you so! I think you are so kind!

I think you are so talented!

Thank you and the ❤ is definitely mutual!

#wordporn

I love it!

Yay 😁 thanks for stopping!

you have such a beautiful way with words

resteemed

Heartfelt thanks ❤

This makes me have more feelings than I'm comfortable having :) Good job.

Thank you.. poetry has a way of peeling off the outer skin & sometimes that's intimidating.. thank you for reading.

I will take your dare! lol. I really enjoy your writing. The overall simplicity makes any unconventional phrases really hold a lot of impact, such as "And cast away a demon/By vanquishing its nest." The use of italics for some lines also was an interesting effect :)

Thank you @d-pend! I'm glad you approve and just started playing with the italic phrases and try to make them join in their own unique way! I'm so glad you like my experiment.

so inspiring...upvoted and followed

Thank you so much for reading and for following. I have followed you too and I will head over to your blog!

That was beautiful, well written and had me warm and fuzzy pulling on my heart strings :)

Also, @KingLeo47 can you make me a beautiful signature/logo too?! How much do you charge let me know :)

Find him in Discord, sometimes he misses tags. Just PM @kubbyelizabeth

Wow, that speaks directly to me. I have that gift but I have not been using it much lately. At least not properly...

Thanks Janelle, it helps me to refocus on the GOOD.
I needed that! :)

hugs wonderful feedback! Thank you!

That's what it's all about.. dip that quill, dear.

I love your gifts. <3
Such a wild rose.

wonderful to find another familiar face Janelle @wandrnrose, love this poem - love and kindness rule xx

Hello @tickledpink 💕 thank you so much and it's wonderful to see you again.

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