I will take your dare! lol. I really enjoy your writing. The overall simplicity makes any unconventional phrases really hold a lot of impact, such as "And cast away a demon/By vanquishing its nest." The use of italics for some lines also was an interesting effect :)
Thank you @d-pend! I'm glad you approve and just started playing with the italic phrases and try to make them join in their own unique way! I'm so glad you like my experiment.