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RE: PoetryDice #31 entry - Poem 'Breathe'
Wow... You've written an awesome piece.. For some reason, I feel relaxed after reading it. :)
Wow... You've written an awesome piece.. For some reason, I feel relaxed after reading it. :)
Thanks, I always think with poetry, as with most things in life, if one other person feels good due to the poem or action, then everything is worthwhile ;-)
Super true! ^^ It would even inspire you to write more and touch more people... ^^
Fujoshi
The twilight of the rotten apple,
Self mocking,
Inwardly shocking,
In a dominated patriarchacy,
What thoughts set you free,
When you search for intimacy,
Woman in the man,
Can you see it,
Can you find it,
Do women grasp its hidden hand,
Or is this cultural spirituality,
Hide, see me if you can?
#poetry
Fugoshi??? It should have been Fujoshi.. hihihi~
but WOW... I'm loving this piece... ^^
Sorry, there must be two spellings online, I had to look it up to understand what it meant - corrected - glad you liked it :-)
No worries.. but yeah.. I really like the poem you made.. <3
Thank you ;o) But that sort of completes the reason it was written - as a response to you saying if one person feels enhanced, write another one ;o)