Poem / Missing you

in #poetry7 years ago

It's been a while since I last wrote a poem, I really missed being able to share and get things off my chest...
Without further a due:

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Missing you

~B you left me all alone
You left to a place unknown
While I'm stranded here at home
Unable to use my phone

I miss being able to hear your voice
I miss being able to speak to you via text
I miss all the deep convesations late at night
I hope you haven't found your "next"

You'll only be gone a couple more days
But every second adds on pains
You'll be back by the third I hope
To your promising words I'll grope
Living on them, I'll hopefully cope
And when you're back safely I'll thank the pope

I just wish you were here with me
I miss you ~B

Note: If there are any spelling errors or things you disagree with, I would appreciate it if you let me know :)

By Ethan
2017/12/19

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you write perfect but i wanna include mine to let you know i feel you
"whenever i miss you...i wont look for you in my dreams... or try to hear your voice in your messages... but i will put my hand across my chest and i will feel you... Miss you

That's really deep and sooooo true... Thank you for adding <3

Good one! Very good one... As a fellow poet.. I'm inspired. I have no choice but to invite

Do you like write poems?

Waooo!

This is awsome

Wow nice piece.. Simple and sincere

It is touching and beautifully constructed

Excellent job, Ethan. Keep up the good work in poetry writing. I write poems and essays also.

👏👏👏👏

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