Life indeed teach us much. There's energy in your poem that only a zest for life can give.
the only reason to retreat-death?
The question mark at the end says you are daring the threat of death to make you stop living. That's a great thing. Too many times, we let living take its toll and we start to fade away. Nice piece of poetry sir
The questioning at the end of this line also says that I'm not sure that death is the end of our path. I am not a believer, but everything can be. The soul, the energy... so much still unknown to mankind!
Hello, sir.
Life...
Life indeed teach us much. There's energy in your poem that only a zest for life can give.
The question mark at the end says you are daring the threat of death to make you stop living. That's a great thing. Too many times, we let living take its toll and we start to fade away. Nice piece of poetry sir
Thank you for such an encouraging feedback!
The questioning at the end of this line also says that I'm not sure that death is the end of our path. I am not a believer, but everything can be. The soul, the energy... so much still unknown to mankind!
It is true. We are still trying to understand what life is.