Not Now
Silence
The rain outside
All standing still
away from frenzy
Back to reality
The needless buzz
paused
Free to stand
to think
to feel
to evolve
This motionless gray
lasting longer
more fruitful
than stirring
Clearer
than the fog of rush
Tomorrow
things to do
to tell
to listen
But not now
Tomorrow.
I'm both surprised and delighted to see you around!
Getting to your poem, I liked it. I could really identify with it. That feeling is difficult to put into words, but you did a great job.
PD: I'd suggest you try adding the tags fiction and writting, and for you to check out the Creativecoin tribe :D
Link to Creativecoin: https://www.creativecoin.xyz/
Hi! I'm glad you liked it, and to see you here.
I just started looking around on Steemit. I've still to tune the thing, especially tags and format... Thanks for the advice. I'll give a look at Creativecoin too. Thanks!
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