Waveform... a freeverse to drift off to sleep...

sixshot (30)in #poetry • 7 years ago

Waveform

From caress of hills,
To the kiss of the valleys,
Rise and fall with me.

The echoes will sing,
Rising to your frequency,
Reverberation.

I cannot lose this,
The dance you play in my ear,
Sing me to my sleep.

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bennettitalia (65) 7 years ago

Beautiful, a lullabye! I love that the hills "caress" and the valleys "kiss". And "the dance you play in my ear" makes me think of a little brightly glowing fairy creature dancing and making music with its movements, right by a sleeper's ear, its melody bleeding into dreams. The merging of landscape and body is really cool in this poem, hard to tell where one ends and the other begins. Following :)

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sixshot (30) 7 years ago

Humbly appreciated good sir! Thank you for the glorious feedback=)

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bennettitalia (65) 7 years ago

Looking forward to reading more of your work @sixshot! Check out (and contribute to, if you wish) the collaborative poem I started, just for fun and to build community in the poetry section of Steemit: https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/steemit-collaborative-poetry-experiment

This is just a fun experiment, and it's already getting pretty silly, but I would be honored if you felt inspired to contribute a couple of lines :)

Also, If you have time to take a look at some of my work, I'd love to hear what you think:

https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/capitulation-a-poem-by-bennettitalia

https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/honesty-a-poem-by-bennettitalia

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