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RE: Waveform... a freeverse to drift off to sleep...
Beautiful, a lullabye! I love that the hills "caress" and the valleys "kiss". And "the dance you play in my ear" makes me think of a little brightly glowing fairy creature dancing and making music with its movements, right by a sleeper's ear, its melody bleeding into dreams. The merging of landscape and body is really cool in this poem, hard to tell where one ends and the other begins. Following :)
Humbly appreciated good sir! Thank you for the glorious feedback=)
Looking forward to reading more of your work @sixshot! Check out (and contribute to, if you wish) the collaborative poem I started, just for fun and to build community in the poetry section of Steemit: https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/steemit-collaborative-poetry-experiment
This is just a fun experiment, and it's already getting pretty silly, but I would be honored if you felt inspired to contribute a couple of lines :)
Also, If you have time to take a look at some of my work, I'd love to hear what you think:
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/capitulation-a-poem-by-bennettitalia
https://steemit.com/poetry/@bennettitalia/honesty-a-poem-by-bennettitalia
I'd be honored, I shall indulge when I can!