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RE: The vertigo it made me fall in the shadows - Original poem - @prydefoltz

in #poetry6 years ago

It is a candle that reminds me
my land
that drowned in a twilight
crying for their children
shaking of impotence.

Fabulous work, Zeleria. I am of the mind that we should have one world and not countries but still certain land speaks to one more than another. But they all speak in their own way. I could do with a little more compassion and less anguish.

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Thanks, Pryde! Your opinion is very important for me.

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