Very nice poem, I like how you use old English words. I liked the line;
Fluttering spoons of wind
That smooth back bronze locks.
Thanks for the share!
Very nice poem, I like how you use old English words. I liked the line;
Fluttering spoons of wind
That smooth back bronze locks.
Thanks for the share!
LOL, looks like I am not the only one that liked that line. Winner.
Yeah it is fun to write in an antiquated style :)
Thanks for sharing the part that made an impact on you!
Have a great day :D