Thou Rainy Youth
Thou Rainy Youth
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Thou mischievious droplets
That irritate the countenance,
Blessèd be thee beside the
Fumes of sorcery that
Sputter by.
That smooth back bronze locks,
Pastel enlivenment of the
Season's subtle change, that
Maketh thee the golden child!
Enchanting aura of man
Betwixt the grunge and
Tenderness. The young
Do hark the colored
Lights which shine
In scintillating
Grins, caress &
Mesmerize the
Eyes & mind.
Monochrome villain,
Time, the wearièd procession
Which eats at the edges of
Enthusiasm's red candle?
Shattered by the maid.
Blue exuberance but
Downstream into the
Beguiling churn?
Subsumed by the fluctuating
Darkness, that e'er cleansing
Flame, into the veins of the
Pyrotechnical peafowl
Exploding unnameable
Things which beckon
Thoughts of Youth &
Rain.
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Written by
@d-pend
9/13/17
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"Wherefore came that
Monochrome villain,
Time, the wearièd procession
Which eats at the edges of
Enthusiasm's red candle?"
Wow, fantastic, just mind blowingly well done. Yes, that is not a real word, but why settle for real words, Dr. suss didn't.
Thanks a lot!
It's really fun to write in this style.
Glad it was also enjoyable to read :D
Wow, very beautiful :)
Glad you think so!
Beautiful poem.Honestly I love the 2nd para most
"Fluthering spoons of wind
That smooth back bronze locks,
Pastel enlivenment of the
Season's subtle change, that
Maketh thee the golden child!"
Loved it :)
Thanks a lot for the feedback @splash-of-angs63! Glad you enjoyed it :D
beautiful poetry
bravoo
I love the rain!!! I promise to read your poem tomorrow! Sorry!
Wow @d-pend great job 👍.I have followed you and upvoted..kindly hoping for your encouragement as well (Blessings❤)
i love poetry
Thanks for your support @lahcen80. I will stop by your page. Have a great day :)
Great works, I wish you success
Likewise sir!
Very nice poem, I like how you use old English words. I liked the line;
Fluttering spoons of wind
That smooth back bronze locks.
Thanks for the share!
LOL, looks like I am not the only one that liked that line. Winner.
Yeah it is fun to write in an antiquated style :)
Thanks for sharing the part that made an impact on you!
Have a great day :D
soo beautiful
Thanks man!