Reading your 'love-poem' before this 'lust-poem', one can see the huge contrasts in approach and message (let alone the end resulting fate!), but also see your technical skill with expressing disparate ideas.

The turning lines:

I want you
I crave you
There is nothing but my hunger

do the best for showcasing the true hollowness of the narrator and the inevitability of the fate that finds them.

A contrasting read to the earlier piece of yours, @japhofin8or, and both equally as enjoyable, if for different reasons.

Your writing is very expressive, honored to have been fortunate enough to come upon it through @girlbeforemirror's pieces and words of praise! Enjoy following both of your poetry.

Thank you so muuch for sharing, good sir.