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RE: When I Fall - An Original Poem - Steemit Exclusive ( A new Experimental Piece hope you like it :P )
I appreciated the use of contrasts in the beginning of the piece with the couplet:
I want you all with me / I want none of you
in that it established the paradoxical lens that the piece is read through, as succinctly summed up by your last line capping all the negative connotations with falling with:
I find the meaning of all
weather this is in death, or just from learning from one's mistakes, I think there is a lot to take away from a simple premise.
Nice execution, Angel (and I mean that in the writing sense ^_^ )
Thank you man. It means a lot to hear it from you. Since it was really new to me to write such a piece. I really did not expect it myself to make anything good actually...