Sorry but this is awefull. completeley overexposed on the bright side and deph of field is off on the wrong deph, making all points of interest unsharp. Its meant as constructive critique. tip: check the picture 1:1 original size and see if it is sharp, where it should be. sometimes it appears ok in small size downscaled view or on a cellphone.
Hey, I shoot this on film and receive as a high resolution scan - which I can not upload here so I need to scale down, so I did see it in full size.
That being said I agree is overexposed on the bright side and the focus is a bit behind. I came to embrace these things happening when you shoot with a film camera and manual focus. It just comes with the territory.
I guess I like the massiveness of it, like it says that bread is such an important part of our lives. But I understand and respect your point. Unfortunately, the out of focus wasn't intended so it's clearly a mistake..
Looking forward for your critique on the next shots!
Cheers.
Sorry but this is awefull. completeley overexposed on the bright side and deph of field is off on the wrong deph, making all points of interest unsharp. Its meant as constructive critique. tip: check the picture 1:1 original size and see if it is sharp, where it should be. sometimes it appears ok in small size downscaled view or on a cellphone.
Hey, I shoot this on film and receive as a high resolution scan - which I can not upload here so I need to scale down, so I did see it in full size.
That being said I agree is overexposed on the bright side and the focus is a bit behind. I came to embrace these things happening when you shoot with a film camera and manual focus. It just comes with the territory.
I guess I like the massiveness of it, like it says that bread is such an important part of our lives. But I understand and respect your point. Unfortunately, the out of focus wasn't intended so it's clearly a mistake..
Looking forward for your critique on the next shots!
Cheers.