@JamesGetsIt's Kill The Pad Challenge Wk # 5: "Family" (Original Verse/Poem)
Artwork by @scuzzy
Verse Without Gifs (For Verse With Gifs, Scroll Below)
The absence of your father doesn't mean you cannot be one
Just be there for your children, building, healing 'til you see some...
Progress in the modest parent process teaching freedoms
But limitations, and consequences, values also feed 'em...
The aspects of a family, definition and true meaning
Is not based upon lab tests of genetics shown on blue screenings...
Blood's thicker than the water, but most fluid is your being
The people who care about you, with a love farthest from fleeting...
I'm my brother's keeper, won't neglect my sisters either
Taking care of all my loved ones, never be a wife beater...
Family trees are slow-grown, steady strong as White Cedars
Branching out, but still connected, roots are like a flight deeper...
Get wisdom and true manners, Grandma, Grandpa's got the answers
Remember, and making memories, lessons they share Do Matter...
Show gratitude to Mother, Aunts and Uncles, all your Cousins
Nephews, nieces are the sweetest, whether one or more than dozens...
Verse With Gifs
Just be there for your children, building, healing 'til you see some...
But limitations, and consequences, values also feed 'em ...
Is not based upon lab tests of genetics shown on blue screenings...
The people who care about you, with a love farthest from fleeting...
Taking care of all my loved ones, never be a wife beater...
Branching out, but still connected, roots are like a flight deeper...
Remember, and making memories, lessons they share Do Matter...
Nephews, nieces are the sweetest, whether one or more than dozens...
Thank you for reading & viewing this post in its entirety, I hope you enjoyed it for what it's worth.
All Gifs used from Giphy.com
Next Post coming tomorrow
Please Upvote, Comment, Follow & Resteem to show your support
My very own wonderful gif logo provided to me by the generous and kindhearted @papa-pepper Thanks again very much!
Duddddeeee, by far the dopest verse I've seen from you yet... Not saying the other ones weren't dope... Just saying this one hit all the check marks brother.
Loved this... So nice...
Multis, metas, consistent rhyme scheme and structure... Just a dope verse all the way around. Really enjoyed the read!
Appreciate your feedback to the fullest bro, thanks for the challenge and for inspiring this piece and for the 1st place honour. I hope you dig the quick emceeing of this verse :)
https://steemit.com/music/@verbal-d/termitemusic-s-worldwide-cypher-jam-round-24-entry-family-original-song
Feeling the family love. Big respect for this.
Thank you very much, appreciate your nice comment
If you want to hear this being performed over music
I just shared it in my newest post
https://steemit.com/music/@verbal-d/termitemusic-s-worldwide-cypher-jam-round-24-entry-family-original-song
Yeah great stuff, i'll check it out
This is some dope shit
I loved every piece of it
Thank you very much for checking this out, so glad you loved it, appreciate your words
I just performed this rap verse over a beat, here is the post link to it
https://steemit.com/music/@verbal-d/termitemusic-s-worldwide-cypher-jam-round-24-entry-family-original-song
dear friend that's the truth; a family is not just about blood relation but what matters is the care and love we receive.I love that
Thank you very much, yes, you are right, it is never about blood relation, but about how we treat one another. If you want to check this verse being rapped by me, go here
https://steemit.com/music/@verbal-d/termitemusic-s-worldwide-cypher-jam-round-24-entry-family-original-song
I appreciate you stopping by Steem on
wow i love the rap.raw and so cool.you got it men!please check out my new poem on one of our african most admired leader Nelson Mandela.Thanks
Thank you very much, so glad you enjoyed this one. I will check it out now.
welcome
Wow!!! Another winner! I love these verses, and love the gifs, as always! You have a very steady flow, and give such an inspiring message. Yay Family!!!
Thanks so much @simgirl, I love writing verses and performing them with a meaningful purpose. Speaking of flow lyrically, I just flowed the actual verse over music if you wanted to hear how I heard it when I was creating the verse
https://steemit.com/music/@verbal-d/termitemusic-s-worldwide-cypher-jam-round-24-entry-family-original-song
Hi @verbal-d i am @renny-krieger from venezuela
Very good verses dedicated to love and the family, what they give us as a legacy between verses and good company of the word of the Most High.....
Thank you very much for your insightful poetic response, greetings from Germany :)
May God bless you continually and your family
Here is the verse performed over music if you like hiphop
https://steemit.com/music/@verbal-d/termitemusic-s-worldwide-cypher-jam-round-24-entry-family-original-song
Hello Dear Steemian,
I am S.A.R.A.H. (Search Automatically High Reward Articles) Bot.
I'm an artificial intelligence that automatically looks for posts that expect high rewards. I recognize such posts, make my upvote on them and get a high Curation Reward. If you want to join in, you can hang on to my curation trail. You can follow me on Steemauto or on Streemian.
If it looks like this you are doing it right:
Let's maximize our curation rewards together!
Yours,
S.A.R.A.H.
Nice post-Upvoted!! verbal-d
Appreciate it if you do the same for me:)
Do check out the new channel for news at steemit:
Waiting for sunrise to capture, its awesome feeling along with fresh and healthy atmosphere in the early morning.
Dear friend, you do not appear to be following @artzone. Follow @artzone to get a valuable upvote on your quality post!
My apologies @artzone, I just learned about you and I have followed you now, thanks for checking out my post.
You got a 14.46% upvote from @postpromoter courtesy of @verbal-d!
Want to promote your posts too? Check out the Steem Bot Tracker website for more info. If you would like to support the development of @postpromoter and the bot tracker please vote for @yabapmatt for witness!