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RE: @JamesGetsIt's Kill The Pad Challenge Wk # 5: "Family" (Original Verse/Poem)
Duddddeeee, by far the dopest verse I've seen from you yet... Not saying the other ones weren't dope... Just saying this one hit all the check marks brother.
Family trees are slow-grown, steady strong as White Cedars
Branching out, but still connected, roots are like a flight deeper...
Loved this... So nice...
Multis, metas, consistent rhyme scheme and structure... Just a dope verse all the way around. Really enjoyed the read!
Appreciate your feedback to the fullest bro, thanks for the challenge and for inspiring this piece and for the 1st place honour. I hope you dig the quick emceeing of this verse :)
https://steemit.com/music/@verbal-d/termitemusic-s-worldwide-cypher-jam-round-24-entry-family-original-song