Hi Dylan, nice to see you in our community and to have your writing. It is very well written, easy to read and good description. That is very important when you try to capture the attention of readers. Enjoyed it.

Only what I also could advise, at the end you can write that you are the Author / fiction story and so on. But also maybe in one of the post you can shortly write about you. Just a link between the writing you and the reader.

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