Alright, you shared some info we can find in an encyclopedia (old fashioned me.. I also have Grzimek) and more modern men might check the info in wikipedia or perhaps ask AI (always good for an incomplete answer)... but what I miss to make this what you posted good is a personal touch.

A personal for example would be: I have a tortoise it's an awesome animal, no idea who will take care of it after I die because it will most likely live longer than I will. If I wake up in the morning I go to the beach (or pon) to see how he swims and I feed it lettuce and we have fun together. You will not guess what I found this morning.. An Egg! Yes, turns out my turtle is a girl. Can you guys believe that?

Something like that.
A great day to you. Even if you have nothing to write about you can always comment on others unless if you drop a comment written by AI.

A great day to you.