The image of snow in August creates such a surreal and terrifying atmosphere for Emilio Lanucci's story. Your ability to combine his dark thoughts with the eerie weather really captures the reader's imagination. The juxtaposition of his personal struggles and the strange world around him makes for a fascinating narrative. Good luck Emilio's character is deeply developed and relatable in his inner battle. The way you explore his insecurities and interactions with his peers adds a rich layer to the story. An unusual summer backdrop with snow only adds to the sense of otherworldliness and isolation he feels. This is a beautifully crafted piece.