Hi dear,

If it comes to describing what you see the idea is to just describe in short preferable with one or two words and not adding indications.
The same counts for describing what you feel: happy, exciting, amused, overjoyed.

If you do it this way a story/text/poem had more room to develop because you not already made assumptions/indications by just describing.

The text underneath spoils your story because it looks as if it's part of it. I think that is a pity of what you wrote.

When I saw this image, it made me think about how we all express our joy in different ways; some of us leap with excitement, while others appreciate the moment silently.

Your story should count 100 words you used 191

I like your story, all together you wrote a good entry! You find your report in as a separate comment.