The leap of joy
Image from the contest link
I can see two piglets that are playing in the mud. One pig is excitedly bouncing up, which indicates that he is excited or having fun. The other one still in the mud, looking up with surprise at why the other one is jumping. They seem to be loving the muddy mess.
This picture makes me happy and amused. It reminds me of how we all enjoy minor moments in life in different ways. The bouncing pig appears to be overjoyed, whilst the other pig appears puzzled and possibly confused.
Once upon a time, there were two pigs on a lovely farm. Every day, they preferred to roll in the mud. But one day, something remarkable happened. A pig named Benny experienced a burst of excitement. He leaped into the air, jumping out of the mud with a smile on his face.
His friend, Sally who was still in the mud, looked up surprised and asked “Benny why are you bouncing”.
Benny smiled and responded "I don't know, but today I felt extremely joyful. The sun was shining, the mud was melting, and I could not stay still".
When Benny bounced, Sally looked at him, surprised. Sally realized that even the small things can bring happiness into our lives. Even though she didn’t want to bounce, she enjoyed watching Benny have fun. While Benny was happy with the bounce, Sally was happy to watch his bouncing. At that point, she recognized that happiness looked different for everyone, but that's okay.
When I saw this image, it made me think about how we all express our joy in different ways; some of us leap with excitement, while others appreciate the moment silently.
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Hi dear,
If it comes to describing what you see the idea is to just describe in short preferable with one or two words and not adding indications.
The same counts for describing what you feel: happy, exciting, amused, overjoyed.
If you do it this way a story/text/poem had more room to develop because you not already made assumptions/indications by just describing.
The text underneath spoils your story because it looks as if it's part of it. I think that is a pity of what you wrote.
Your story should count 100 words you used 191
I like your story, all together you wrote a good entry! You find your report in as a separate comment.
Thank you for the detailed description; I believe it will help me enhance my story writing skills. I sincerely appreciate your entire team's efforts.
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Thank you for the review report; I apologize for the extra words; they occurred since I did not pay attention to the word count. All of these events will improve my knowledge.
Thankyou @senehasa for inviting me to the contest 🌹
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