Big Chance of Opportunity Opened

in Freewriters12 days ago

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Ang opportunity sa buhay ay palaging bukas kapag buksan natin ang ating isipan at puso. Tayo lang makapagbukas nito kung gugustohin natin. Binuksan na ng Diyos ang pintuan ngunit minsan tayo ay may pag alinlangan dahil ayaw natin sa pagbukas natin ang isang bagay o paraan ay magsarado ang ating mga bagay na gusto natin sa ating sarili.

Bakit hindi natin buksan ang binigay niya? Kailangan buksan natin ang lahat para malaman kung ito ay nararapat sa atin. Hindi man niya tayo bigyan ng ikakasama sa ating damdamin. Ngunit kung ito ay naging sanhi ng hindi natin gusto, ito ay pagsubok lamang kung hanggang kailan , hanggang saan tayo manatili sa ating pansariling pag unawa.

Buksan natin ang ating puso at isipan para magkaroon ng pagbabago . Baka ito ang hinahanap natin . Kung hindi pa rin ito dumating, huwag magmadali, dahil kung ito ay sirado pa ang pintuan para sa atin, hwag mag -alala magbubukas din ito balang araw.

Sana po Lord , buksan mo ang bagong pintuan sa buhay namin na may positibong aspeto na magdadala ng kaligayahan, kasaganahan at kapayapaan hindi lang sa akin kundi para sa lahat , sa pamilya ko lalo na sa kapatid kong may sakit ngayon. Aasahan po namin ang bukas mong mga palad na tanggapin ang aming dalangin. Buong puso kong buksan ang aking sarili manalig sa Iyo.

English Translation

The opportunity in life is always open when we open our minds and hearts. Only we can open it if we want to. God has opened the door but sometimes we have doubts because we don't want to open something or a way to close the things we want to ourselves.

Why don't we open what he has given us? We need to open everything to know if it is right for us. He may not give us something that will harm our feelings. But if it has caused us something we don't want, it is just a test of how long, how long we will stay in our personal understanding.

Let's open our hearts and minds for a change. Maybe this is what we are looking for. If it still hasn't come, don't rush, because if it is still closed to us, don't worry, it will open someday.

I hope, Lord, that you will open a new door in our lives with a positive aspect that will bring happiness, prosperity and peace not only to me but to everyone, to my family especially to my brother who is sick now. We will expect your open palms to accept our prayers. I open myself with all my heart to believe in You.


Where are you @jurich60, @sarimanok and @diosarich?

Steem On!

@olivia08

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 4 days ago 

Se escribe desde el corazón. Escribimos sintiendo esa música eterna que mana desde lo profundo. Es la sinfonía del alma imponiéndose. Escribimos cosas que no sabíamos que llevábamos dentro. Por lo que este arte nuestro es humanidad. Nos mejora y no muestra al mundo como entes más sensibles. Si lees, si te divierte en escribir. Vas a aprender. Vas a sacar lo mejor de ti. Eso necesita el artista. Lo necesita el que solo puede observar el arte. Sé siempre una mejor versión. Cambia la calidad de tu pensamiento (a través del arte) y cambiará la calidad de tu vida. Todas las mujeres son hermosas. Son la esencia. Son una inspiración. Éxitos y en las nuevas escrituras.

Upvoted! Thank you for supporting witness @jswit.

 9 days ago 

It's not easy to change or open up if you are hurt time after time. If you do so and are not ready for it you will be fooled again and didn't learn a lesson. I don't see the need to open up for everyone. Just a few is good enough and preferably people like me so we can give another energy. If everyone would do that the world would be a great place to be, don't you think so?
But back to the hurt soul, it takes time to get over it and souls don't have a clock so it's fine as it is. No need to rush.

You are always citing a good words for me. You always made me stronger. You even made me realized . You sent me a message pulling me out from the nightmare I had been through. I hope one day I will be feeling better and you can see me in the best position. You open up the door for many opportunities. God sent you to guide me, to mentor me. It's an amazing thing that had happened . Yes, its not easy to go forward when still looming the negativity of my yesterday but one day I will be.🙏🙏🙏

 5 days ago 

Let's go for the good life! Even if it's only 5 minutes per day cling to that and if that door is closed you can always crawl out of the window.
It's okay to be sad but you should also kick our arse and say: now it's enough. I cried, I felt bad for me and it's time to stand up and face the world again, time to save and do this for me. You decided to stay where you are an expat so the next step is to build yourself a home.
Even if we stand still in a way we still go forward.
A warm embrace to you dear friend.

I am improving now, tears dried up, heart hardened a little saving all the rest for myself. You are not the only one who told me such thing and I am the master of my own. Letting go my tears softened those opportunities coming inside my life and thank you for being a part of this chances given to me.

 8 days ago 

Nice. But I think only a saint can be open all the time. The rest of us 99.99% open and close as we try to navigate the mysterious ocean of life we find ourselves in. Closing gives us time to process. Like taking rest at night. :>)

Agree with you too. Thank you for making me realized of soany things around me. I am partly closing some negative chapter but still it is not so easy doing it at once. Littl

 6 days ago 

There's something goin on within you. Maybe growing pains. :)

Yes, its really happening, but it made me stronger. If I'm weak, I couldn't handle what's life had been through. I grew up in pain but every pain became a ladder to move forward. As if it is the normal day when I cry but there's a better outcome after all that I should be grateful. Thank you

 8 days ago (edited)

The translation I read wasn't great but you seem to have written a prayer. Was it also a poem?-I wonder... I wish I could read your language.
To believe in God is always a blessing, for those who who are able to.

 8 days ago (edited)

Its not a poem, I am not a poet . It might be a prayer. I am just closing my eyes, wrote what popped up in my mind as I consider a freewrite. I wrote and post based on the story of my life, either the outcome became a poem or a prayer. Thank you for coming. I told @wakeupkitty that I was sonafrsid of writing in freestyle because I thought it's always about poetry . I don't like fiction too. It's up to you to describe it, what I can say, its the word from my heart and mind.

The first part is my language, I am a Filipina (Philippines) and honestly I am not a good writer too and I know there are some issue about grammar or whatever. Again thank you @hefestus

Thanks for the answer. About the grammar... Keep practicing. You're not so bad at it and are quite readable. I just wondered if it was a poem because, when you translate whatever language into english, it looses a lot of the original music and rhymes, but I did enjoy your writing. :)
Steem on!

Thank you for the advice and I will improve little by little in perfect time. I am not a poet so I wrote just what is in my mind. And real life story is my best choice in blogging.

The English version is added which you can read. It is more about sharing thoughts which makes the perfect freewrite

I appreciate and understood that. My question was only about the original form of the text. Not that it matters much. Still, I did enjoy the read.

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