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RE: Big Chance of Opportunity Opened
The translation I read wasn't great but you seem to have written a prayer. Was it also a poem?-I wonder... I wish I could read your language.
To believe in God is always a blessing, for those who who are able to.
Its not a poem, I am not a poet . It might be a prayer. I am just closing my eyes, wrote what popped up in my mind as I consider a freewrite. I wrote and post based on the story of my life, either the outcome became a poem or a prayer. Thank you for coming. I told @wakeupkitty that I was sonafrsid of writing in freestyle because I thought it's always about poetry . I don't like fiction too. It's up to you to describe it, what I can say, its the word from my heart and mind.
The first part is my language, I am a Filipina (Philippines) and honestly I am not a good writer too and I know there are some issue about grammar or whatever. Again thank you @hefestus
Thanks for the answer. About the grammar... Keep practicing. You're not so bad at it and are quite readable. I just wondered if it was a poem because, when you translate whatever language into english, it looses a lot of the original music and rhymes, but I did enjoy your writing. :)
Steem on!
Thank you for the advice and I will improve little by little in perfect time. I am not a poet so I wrote just what is in my mind. And real life story is my best choice in blogging.
The English version is added which you can read. It is more about sharing thoughts which makes the perfect freewrite
I appreciate and understood that. My question was only about the original form of the text. Not that it matters much. Still, I did enjoy the read.