RE: "SEC20/WK4: Graphic Design Hands - On practical 1"
Hello @hamidrizwan thank you for participating in this week's lesson. We have assessed your entry and we present the result of our assessment below.
Feedback:
Let me start by commending you for the effort put into this practical work. Weldone. Your result is not bad, It's obvious you really wanted to follow me right from top to bottom and I appreciate. I would just point out how you should have done it better.
You fell short in the aspect of balance, as a principle. The text element seems to have been blown out of proportion while the image and effect element looks small and have been swallowed up by the text element
I want you to picture the design in a tabular form, the text element on one side and the image element on the other, to achieve balance, you have to ensure that the total size of your image element is the same or close to that of your text element put together, by so doing non would overshadow the other.
Another thing you need to take note of in you design is the space to your right and left, it must match, it's another aspect of balance as well and your element must not be too close to the edge on the right, left, top, bottom, there must be allowance so that it doesn't get cut off in the process of printing the design.
I also noticed your colours are conflicting, you might want to go over the lesson on colour theory again, it would help you a great deal.
In all, you did beautifully well and I must commend your effort. I hope you keep up with the energy level dear student.
Criteria | Remark |
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Plagiarism Free | ✅ |
AI Free | ✅ |
Attention to details | 4.7/5 |
Overall Outcome | 4.7/5 |
Total score | 9.4/10 |
Regards
@lhorgic❤️
Sir InshAllah I will fix the mistake next time and I have noted your points. Thank you so much for reviewing my post and encouraging me.
Best Wishes 😍 Always be happy