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It's interesting to know you enjoy swimming as a form of recreation. I wish I could ever like water. I also buy your definition of recreation. It's a healthy form of livelihood. Thanks for sharing. I'll implore you give more catchy sentences to your introduction next time. It serves as first impression. People would barely want to read till the end of it's just about greetings. Give them something intriguing that will make them want to read everything and comment as well. Thanks for sharing.
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