RE: Write in Micro size: (The Clever Stock Agent)
Hi @sur-riti
I'm glad you took on this challenge of writing micro stories and that you enjoyed it. I also read that you learned in the process of reducing your 250 original words to less than 100.
Your story, well done with its beginning, its development and an ending. When I read it translated into Spanish, I thought that I would like to have a stockbroker, like the protagonist, attentive to detecting opportunities, very good control of his emotions and who seeks for his clients to obtain profits.
The first three paragraphs generated a lot of expectation of adventure in me, also curiosity, what would he do with that valuable information?
The end, lowered those expectations, because the stockbroker continues to be a very good professional.
Tomorrow I will send you the feedback according to the parameters of the contest.
Again, good work and thank you very much for participating.
Hello friend,
I am very happy that I lived up to your expectations and that you enjoyed my micro story, but in the end you wrote that the last paragraph has diminished your hopes, I did not understand what this means. Anyway, it does not matter, today I will wait for feedback according to your parameters.
With thanks.