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RE: Writing, Drawing, Feedback, Not Giving Up on Ourselves - Freewritehouse to the rescue!
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Don't take it personally if I can't remember names in your stories. Off the top of my head, I would say Dranuvar was the name of @kaelci's hot-guy protagonist in her NaNoWriMo novel, but no, @dranuvar is a Steemit user, and the name of the guy in Half Past the Moonfall is... starts with a D, I'd swear...
that made me giggle so much.
Also, I had to copy and paste Kat's name over and over too hahahah! I wrote it once, with the help of "rose wine" on google to snag that accented e... and then I went through the document and "search and replaced" all of the Katea's with the fancy one. :D
Oooh, that makes me feel better: even the author did a sort of "cheat" by doing a global search and replace to get the accent in Katea's name. :)
But this - this - no!!! - I have read many books, many by Indie Authors, and yours is golden. I feel that it's terrible--wrong! and I don't want to convince people to read a terrible book. I've taken to be self-deprecating about it. "This won't be the best book you've ever read, but it might make you crack a smile once or twice!" more than once or twice. The fairy cell phone charger is the only thing you might wince and cringe over, not because of your writing, but because... (no spoiler here!). Humor and wit abound in the story. Keep talking like this, and I might go re-read it and start fault-finding. But no, I'll just laugh out loud at the city girl in the expensive dress chasing the Min-Min lights into the wilderness. It's a great story!!!!