#freewrite (a glimpse into my head) PROMPT: Red

jjwriter85 (42)in #freewrite • 7 years ago

A sigh, released
could bring her peace
from lips
so frail and red
But breath was weak
Too weak to speak
the words
they should have said
A heart was torn
Her soul, forlorn
Distain
was left instead
And as it goes
the pain she knows
remains
the color red

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7 years ago in #freewrite by jjwriter85 (42)

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sharoonyasir (58) 7 years ago

Oh my god, did you say you created this in just 5 minutes? No way. this is beautiful and so so profound. You are really creative and someone who deserves more recognition. Resteeming this little gem. :)

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