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RE: Experimental story- The Funhouse
It could be nice you can continue your experimental history.
Bust a couple of ideas regarding the text:
- i dont know why but it seems the house of fun can be turned into a nightmare house in a twist of the history.
- i think you play with the readers and you make them involves in the history throught thinking... as long as you know the rooms... wich would you choose? :-)
Really interedting and as always you cant stop.reading it until the end.