Very mysterious... feels like our protagonist is on the verge of being dragged into events well beyond their control. Is this a standalone piece or is there more coming? It would work as both although it definitely changes how you read it. Such a tantalising write!
This one left me with mixed feelings.. it's because I believe I would get sleepless nights if something like this really happened to me.
I love your style of writing and the way you put up your sentences together. I'm just not that fond of the theme but this is a personal choice as I am not good with dealing with sad/frightening/mystical situations :)
But if you would ever write a book I would for sure read it!
Very mysterious... feels like our protagonist is on the verge of being dragged into events well beyond their control. Is this a standalone piece or is there more coming? It would work as both although it definitely changes how you read it. Such a tantalising write!
Thank you! It was a freewrite so I actually have no idea where I was going with it. I had all the poor kids at the border on my mind... :/
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This little story left me with many questions. It certainly could turn into a longer story if you felt so inclined!
Oh, no! What a maddening situation! No police, but what if something awful is happening. Can you star 69 or something?
Great freewrite!
This one left me with mixed feelings.. it's because I believe I would get sleepless nights if something like this really happened to me.
I love your style of writing and the way you put up your sentences together. I'm just not that fond of the theme but this is a personal choice as I am not good with dealing with sad/frightening/mystical situations :)
But if you would ever write a book I would for sure read it!
Great story. A terrible feeling never to know what was going on.
It’s the Wednesday free write encouraging team here with your prompt for today: https://steemit.com/freewrite/@mariannewest/day-244-5-minute-freewrite-wednesday-prompt-wood
I love the way you narrate. It's a very engaging text, will it continue?
I don't think so... I don't really know where it was going. But maybe!
Thank you for reading!
You have heart and the world needs heart! :-) I love the way you write.