Make it 😃😃 Its good. It is said that monkeys are not the most intelligent after humans, octopuses are !! Glad to see how you placed it into a fictional character!! 👏🏻

I also started writing fiction recently. Its not that creative as yours, but i feel it deserves a read! Have a look at it in my profile if you feel like. I wish to learn from you and write better 😃