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RE: Finish the Fiction Story Contest - WEEK #10
Welcome back @papacrusher!
She peered intently into it's glass eyes. She pulled him closer and closer to see if their was any change in his frozen stare. She tilted her head slight to the side to see if she could perceive any noise coming from the wooden shell.
In this passage you were able to build up the suspense with real mastery. I appreciated your fine horror ending!
Thanks for the compliment and I'm glad to be back! Sorry I missed so many weeks but life in the real world is too time consuming...lol.
Yes, life is life consuming 😛 it's good to read you and come always when you feel!