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RE: Constrained Writing Contest #15 - What is Freedom?
A hanger? :D
Word of advice, though:
Just last night, this girl, Linda,
Since it's always the same girl, you could easily omit "this girl"... :p
Also;
it doesn’t feel not right at all.
You have 2 negatives in a row here.
Yeah. It was that easy, huh? :D
Thank you, I really appreciate your feedback!
Although for the last one, the double negative was there on purpose.
Not at first :p
Hmmm. Now that you mention it...
Makes sense :p
Thank you very much for your entry :D
Welcome! I'm having fun with these contests and prompts. :)