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RE: Constrained Writing Contest #15 - What is Freedom?

A hanger? :D

Word of advice, though:

Just last night, this girl, Linda,

Since it's always the same girl, you could easily omit "this girl"... :p
Also;

it doesn’t feel not right at all.

You have 2 negatives in a row here.

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Yeah. It was that easy, huh? :D

Thank you, I really appreciate your feedback!

Although for the last one, the double negative was there on purpose.

Not at first :p

Hmmm. Now that you mention it...
Makes sense :p

Thank you very much for your entry :D

Welcome! I'm having fun with these contests and prompts. :)

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