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RE: ColorChallenge: ThursdayGreen - "Kicking a Hornet's Nest" [11MinuteFreeWrite]
Great chapter here! I remembered that I was reading a 'freewrite' when I read "Damnit! I forgot what I was going to say!" I run into that problem frequently, I just don't type it out! ;) It may have been an intentional part of the dialogue that you planned, I just saw it as the improv showing it's way into the story, breaking that 'fourth wall' as they say in theater.
I know I'm late getting around to commenting, I actually read this a couple of days ago, but had no time until now.
Thanks, brother! No comment is ever late for me, every comment is appreciate equally. Well, except for those 'nice post' ones, but that's a whole other can of worms.
What specific dialogue are you referring to? Yeah, I get what you mean. It's a really hard habit to shake off, isn't it? Normally, we would be able to mull over it, but with freewrites, there's simply no time haha!
Thank you for finding the time to comment, brother. I truly appreciate it :D
It was the line "Damnit, I forgot what I was going to say!" that sounded to me like the author (you) talking to the reader, but I may have misinterpreted that dialogue.
I do throw in those sneaky 4th wall breakers whenever I can, so I won't fault you for thinking that haha! It became such a habit that sometimes I do that as a reflex. Since this series was all reflex, yes. Associative property :D
It's all legal in the world of improv, 'I made that fourth wall, I'll break it if I want!'
Haha! That's good to know! Makes me feel a bit saddened when I realize I didn't break the rules with less. Less anarchistic, I feel.