You painting is really good however when talking about your art and tutorial you can let people fell more into it by telling them about the connection you Jane with your peice. Let them feel like they are doing the painting and not you. Let them use there senses more. Nothing is wrong with it because art in any way or form is a creation of expression.
Don't worry you are a great artist it just also might be the audience you delivering to.
Keep on steem on im gonna upvote you. And follow you.