I love the message here, but two things stand out in the first two sentences: the idea that society needs to be arranged and that anarcho-capitalism is just another order. Both suggest central planning, and most leftists would say, if we're gonna arrange our society anyway, let the government do it. But I'm not even sure you need that first paragraph because it doesn't move your message forward. In fact, you could delete the first two and still retain all the content you need for this particular message.