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RE: [Original Novel] Pressure: First Encounter, Part 1

in #writing7 years ago

she later learned would glow in the dark in the event of a power failure.

held out the cold black death of water pressure that constantly probed every seam for a way inside.

the unimaginable weight of an entire ocean pressing down on the station, struggling to crush the invaders' stronghold.

Hey @alexbeyman

Really enjoyed this one, the quotes above are from your story... hehe this is either really blatant foreshadowing or just poor use of descriptive detail, not in the sense that this was written poorly at all, no. But I was put off a little by the more than once reference to the dome and the pressure of the water and depth. Otherwise I really enjoyed the story. Looking forward to what might come ;)

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