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RE: Three Ways to Avoid Lazy Character Description
I never thought about the author-intrusion before but this makes a lot of sense. The opinion of ‘Mark’ in your example worked so much better than the author’s intrusion. Thanks for the great useable tips.
glad you find them helpful @wildflowerjessi. Happy to share. :) Nice name btw
Thankyou so much! :)