5 Reasons to Shatter the Editing-While-Writing Addiction
When I first started writing, for serious, I had a horrible, horrible habit. An addiction, really. When I would sit down to write, I would read over some amount of the previous work (sometimes all of it) and I would start tweaking and changing things. I’d spend a lot of time fixing wording and rearranging sentences. But not a lot of time actually writing.
Eventually, I’d get bored or something else would catch my attention and I’d start something new. Only to do it all again when I reached the middle-ish of that story.
Sound familiar?
As I learned more about writing through getting my MFA and hanging out with writers who actually finished stuff, I realized I was doing it wrong. Way wrong. At least for me. Sure, some writers can actually complete things even if they interrupt their writing to edit previous stuff. But as I listened to more and more professional authors, I found that most of them didn’t do that. Or, if they did, they’d already outlined their entire story, so they knew what was happening when. (I was definitely not a plotter back in the day!)
I’ve been in the publishing industry for almost ten years now, mainly on the back end — editing, publishing, etc. — though I have also had work published myself, both fiction and non-fiction. In that time, I’ve taught and coached a lot of writers and what I’ve found is the worst habit of novice writers, especially, is this habit of tweaking and editing the completed bits of the first draft rather than concentrating all of their writing time on creating the rest of the story.
I know why they do this. Because their skill doesn’t yet match their vision for the work, so they keep trying to make it better. I totally get the inclination. But don’t do that! Here’s why:
1. You Lose Your Groove
It’s pretty well-researched that your brain needs time to fully shift between tasks. The general consensus is that for each switch that you make, you lose 20 minutes of productive time. If you’re constantly writing, then editing, then writing, then editing, you’re losing a lot of your productivity, meaning you’re wasting a lot of your own time.
2. Your Brain Doesn’t Like It
Writing is primarily a creative endeavor. Editing is primarily analytical. Those processes live in different parts of the brain. That’s a simplistic view, because the reality is that both sides of the brain work in tandem, but the reality is still that you’re using more of the left side of your brain for editing and the right side for writing.
Because of this, the shift mentioned above can be more difficult for people. You’re not just shifting tasks, but you’re changing which part of your brain you are mainly accessing. For me, going from editing to writing is always harder than going from writing to editing. So I always do writing before I tackle anything editing related (always either a pro editing project or a different, complete story that I’m working on revisions for).
3. It’s Wasted Time
The first few pages are critical in any story. It’s when you hook your reader and draw them in so that they will invest time in your world. Often, novice writers will revise and revise and revise their opening before they’ve finished the rest of the story. And by the time they get to the end, it’s clear that they started the story in the wrong place and so the opening needs to be scrapped. But it makes them not want to do what’s best for the story, because they’ve put so much time and effort into it and it’s so perfect.
This can happen anywhere in the story. It just tends to happen more with the opening. But not deleting scenes that need to be deleted is doing a disservice to the story and to the reader. So all that time spent editing is wasted, because you’re throwing away the work and you could have spent that time writing.
4. It Trashes Your Motivation
It’s a given that if you’re working on three things at the same time (any things), it will take longer to get any one of them done. Writing is already hard and can take a long time. When you stop writing in order to edit, that means it will take you longer to complete the piece you’re working on. Especially early in a career, we need all the positive feels we can get. And when we finish a work, whether it’s a short story or a novel or a poem, we feel accomplished. We feel happy. We feel proud. And we have a right to all these feelings. But in order to get them, we need to do something to warrant them and finishing a piece is the best way to do that. So finish as fast as possible.
5. Mediocre complete is far superior to brilliant incomplete
I said this to someone on Reddit recently and I think it bears repeating. You can fix mediocre. You can even make mediocre into brilliant. But you can’t fix incomplete.
‘Nuff said.
So there you have it. My five reasons to stop editing as you write.
Tell me, is this a habit you have? Does it work for you?
Is it a habit you broke? How did you do it?
Would you be interested in a follow up post about ways to break yourself of this habit?
Let me know in the comments!
I prefer to record by audio mostly cos if you just write all the time on paper or by laptop you will be going back and forward like a romantic broken boomerang!
This is actually something that one of the most prolific living SF authors (Kevin J Anderson) does too. He records his books as he's hiking, then sends the recordings to someone to transcribe. It actually makes for really fast writing. It's something I plan to play with in the future, but haven't done as yet :)
Usually when I go out walking around one of my local big parks in London it clears my head of the typical rubbish you sometimes think at home. I just start recording on the audio on mobile phone and just start talking away into, this is my best tactic and it stops my mind drifting away into other things. I always do a run first and then my walk to record as my brain becomes so sharp and active after my run. I do this for my motivational writing and also for my stand up comedy too. The great outdoors inspire me more than sitting within four walls at home. Thank you for your info and getting back to me too!
On a completely unrelated note: I love London! I hope to get back there sometime soon. We're actually supposed to be making a visit out there in the summer, but I just had some big house-related expenses, so I'm not sure we'll be able to swing it :( We'll see!
Thanks so much for commenting! :)
Yes London is a magic city. Tourists adore central London and the West End but I much prefer the heights of Camden Town. You have all walks of life there but the people of Camden keep it more real as a community. Regents Park and Primrose Hill where I go for my visioned audio walks most days.
Many thanks and have a cracking weekend too!
I will keep those on my radar for whenever I get back! I like doing some touristy stuff, but also, I prefer to hang out where locals do. I love learning about people and how they live, so just doing touristy stuff doesn't feed that particular need :)
Have a great weekend yourself! :)
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Nice post. For me, I like to spend a lot of time editing after I've written a whole piece.
That's the best way to do it, in my opinion, for all the reasons outlined above. I know quite a few successful professional authors (ie - fiction writing is their "day job"), and the vast majority of them do not edit while they write. Some do, but I find that most of those who do are heavy outliners/plotters, so their story is already set, generally speaking, before they even start the writing process.
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One of my techniques to avoid editing (and messing with fonts, italics etc.) while writing is to make my first draft with pen and paper. Since I can't make it look "attractive", I am forced to concentrate on the basic message and leave the inevitable revisions for later.
I've actually read a couple blog posts by writers who do this. I plan to give it a whirl on a short story soon.
I think National Novel Writing Month is great for training yourself not to edit. There's a lot to write every day and usually not much time, for most of us. So just powering through is the main goal. I also use an app called Write or Die that strongly encourages keeping the writing going, rather than going back and reading/editing.
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