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RE: Fresh 5 Writing contest - Breaking Point
Her first impression of India was of a swarm of life drowning humanity. There were people everywhere, as far as the eyes could see. Hypocrisy in every frame. She saw a Mercedes being blocked by a wandering cow, people living on the side of the road beside palatial bungalows. Yet she couldn’t fathom who was happier. The paradox tugged at her mind.
This is exactly how I remember it too. Perfect.
I've written reams of essays on the paradox that is India, just wanted to capture a nugget.