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RE: [Original Novel] Metal Fever 2: The Erasure of Asherah, Part 15

in #writing6 years ago

The ceiling light flickered. I heard the squeak of rubber on the asphalt, some horns and angry Chinese shouts.

Great how many details so that we readers can better imagine the scene.

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